Two pigeons, on my window sill,
shying away from the monsoon rains,
gently cooing, with life afill,
seeing me, they risked the clouds again.
Back they came, fleeing those dreary, wet pains,
but I, covert in a corner, did blunder,
at their confused, affectionate fluttering- I laughed without refrain;
scared, they fled, wits asunder.
They were, two hearts, each shielding the other,
made wet by a person's blunder,
sticking together through varied times,
and by fate. Ah, Fate! What a wonder!
And I am one, with two eyes,
taking it all in,
hoping to be knowing and wise,
amidst the wide world's din.
9 comments:
Heyy your very first comment from your very biggest fan! I have a question for you. Are you just referring to the pigeons that take shelter on your sill from the rains, or are you using the pigeons as a metaphor to something deeper? Do tell me, I can't bear guessing!
Yeah I'm still trying to read between the lines too! But as usual great job! Chickdoos you really need to try to send these poems to a magazine/newspaper!! Love ya!
Hey Ambs baby
Your peoms are getting me a free ride on the clouds!!! Thanks
RA
I know what!!! The two pigeons are Varun and KAvitu. See, Kavitu asked one for her BDay and here's Ambs baby writing a tale of two birds on 1st Oct.
Good guess to sneha and Kanchi's Q's, Ambu???
RA
Hey Ambar...dude, your poems keep getting better and better...they strike a chord somewhere inside man, I just wanted you to know that you're truly gifted...keep it up bro!
i hope you're attacked by pigeons some day!! :-P
Hi Ambar, nice to hear from you. There are 2 ways to open tabs in IE.
1) Download IE 7 (new version)
2) Download Windows Live toolbar
Both are easily googleable (this is now a word in the oxford dictionary i believe)
heyy pro.....so when's the book coming out? You gotta come over one day to help me understand....way to go...awesome stuff
superb composition pal.....fantastic..
keen to read some more from u pal...
cheerio,
shreyansh
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