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Wednesday, September 07, 2005

My Two Dolls

My Two Dolls

I'm a fit, manly young lad,
athletic, sharp, strong,
but am touched with a very feminine fad,
to play with dolls, but don't get me wrong.

Two dolls to me are very close,
enough to lift me when I get morose,
enough to liven me up with a cheer,
enough to laugh with me, or to together shed a tear.

Close enough due to fate and time,
without those, this would be a different rhyme,
but to lighten this verse, teasing them is a pleasure,
their loving retorts I greatly treasure.

My mother being the first doll, among other things, of course,
thinking, working, usually in sweet repose,
as I support myself on her small shoulders, smilingly does she sigh,
to tease back, to counter riposte, under dignity does she try.

The second being mother's eldest sister, but wait,
teasing her is not easy, so smart and childlike is her gait.
Every time, without fail, she gives me a hard run for my money,
as funny as life, as true as love, her words, ginger and honey.

As I play around today with these two dolls, all mine,
doing what I used to consider below my years,
playing, poking, laughing, learning, still manly fit and fine,
I'm filled with pity with people who don't play with dolls, my peers.

16 comments:

Anonymous said...

Ambs baby, you have done me the best complis, my dear. Where am I...thinking how can I befriend this fire brand, sharp, smart, young lad who had a funda of knowledge and an answer to every Q...dear me... u now tell me, that our-two-some is so much fun. Thanks young man. I rever you and your words!!! Rajam ammi

Anonymous said...

Hey ambs

Thats great! Thanks, tonnes of loves, Mummy

Anonymous said...

Hey Ambar, great poem man ;). It was also great talking yesterday

Anonymous said...

Hey Chickdoos...Great job man!! Wish I could play with my two dolls too :) For a change, you've started nice poems about people..the last I remember, well I wont go there :p..Just kidding..Keep up the good work

AC said...

You know, I think I'll really put up a poem, 'My Sister', which I wrote in the third grade. I think Sneha remembers what its all about, don't ya?

Anonymous said...

Hey hey hey!! I try to be discreet and this is how it turns out! No way, you're not putting up that poem at any cost( you little...) :)

Anonymous said...

Hey ambar yaar, that was awesome!!! I can't believe this is coming from a guy with a sore mouth, who I used to tease about girls, guys, and everything else that has come our way! Your really growing up...that doesn't scare me... but that means I must be growing up too!!! I bet Rajam ammai and mashi feel really gratified about your poem; I really love it, it's one of my favorites!! Love so much,
Kanch

AC said...

Thanks Kanch, look like you are growing up ;) Good for you :)

PS - Let the teasing continue for ever and ever... Good times...

Anonymous said...

Your telling me... I could use someone to tease....

Anonymous said...

Your tellin me... I could use someone to tease.... but not about TJ

AC said...

Hahaha...

Anonymous said...

Dude nice poem i thought you didnt know anything poetry , btw u just a novice, need practice......blah,blah..... :), nice one ,try recognize me ,and NO HINTS ;)
cya
ANONYMOUS

P.S. GREAT ONE!!

AC said...

Is it that geeky, 'hope'ful boy who sits in the back of my class? Irritating little bugger ;)

Anonymous said...

Yo..
lets have some updation please

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Anonymous said...

m d same anonymous(above)i read ur poems again n cudnt help my self 4m admirin em again......they're reli reli nice...(hope 2 read more of em)