For My Sisters Dear
As I gaze out in the sky so blue,
with a slash of orange, of pink a hue,
I'm sad to say this present is long overdue,
for my sisters, my precious few.
As I hasten on my machine to write,
thinking fast in the evening light,
upon myself I'm filled with spite,
as I hope this is adequate, hopefully quite.
My heartless critic writers,
my opponents, punishers, fighters,
yet bosom close ye far and short sighters,
to have you I'm a lucky blighter.
Your eyes filled with rage,joy, or with many a tear,
your word can be a petal, or a sharp spear,
yet this one thing I fear,
I couldn't love you more, my sisters dear.
Sunday, August 21, 2005
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8 comments:
I hope thats good enough...
Awesome poem man...truly awesome, you've always been good, but lately, your poems have been getting even better!
Keep it up.
Wow Kavi, that comment bought tears in my eyes. I'm serious. Consider this a big hug from me.
Love,
Ambar
ambs,
You just made my day...that was beautiful..kavi you're comments were rightly said :)
Better than any gift ever, ambuuu..
lots and lots of love,
Sneha
O god Ambar that was so sweet, what am I s'posed to do now???? I think we all agree with Kavi's speech, though right now the little critic is being a looser anyway, lotsa love, hugs, and keep on writing
Lvs
Oh God ambs, sooo sweettt
I think we all agree w/kavi, though right now she's bein a loser ;) anyway, lotsa luv, hugs, and keep writing Love ya!
kavitu, your comments are wonderful.. keep it up!! Loves and hugs,
Mashi
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